ALl of the pictures that i am using, i have taken myself so that i do not have problems with copyright. The only copyright i have given is for Station taxis, i think this is the easiest way.
Monday, November 30, 2009
Progress
I am currently continuing to write and edit articles for my local newspaper. Before i wrote my first article i imagined that i would reread it and be able to edit first time, but in fact i am rewriting it more than i thought. I think i underestimated how many times i would have to go through it, although it is better so that it reads better as a newspaper article. I still have to take some pictures for an article, and i am doing a homes for sale or rent section which i will take pictures for. I am going to use homes that i easily have access to so that it means i will not have problems with copyright, if i was to take the pictures from an estate agents website. I am trying to keep my stories as local and recent as possible so that when i come to have people to review it they will know my topics and will be able to give a good review.
Thursday, November 19, 2009
Copyright
My local newspaper will contain a lot of local advertising, i asked permission from station taxis which is a local taxi company that are based in Wymondham. The first email below is is what i sent to the company, I needed to obtain permission from the company as they produced their own logo.
My name is Hannah and i am currently at Wymondham High Sixth Form studying media.
I am producing a local newspaper for my examination piece and would liketo include some advertising from the local area. Would it be possible if iwas to use your logo/business name from your website. My newspaper willnot be published but will be seen by examiners.
Thank you very much for your time
Yours Faithfully
Hannah Harvey
Below is the response that i recieved from back, i am very pleased as i did not expect to hear back as most companies would believe this to not be important enough for them to repsond to.
Dear Hannah, yes it is ok to use our web site details,good luck in your exams and do not forget us when your need a taxi,
Simon Pilgrim
My name is Hannah and i am currently at Wymondham High Sixth Form studying media.
I am producing a local newspaper for my examination piece and would liketo include some advertising from the local area. Would it be possible if iwas to use your logo/business name from your website. My newspaper willnot be published but will be seen by examiners.
Thank you very much for your time
Yours Faithfully
Hannah Harvey
Below is the response that i recieved from back, i am very pleased as i did not expect to hear back as most companies would believe this to not be important enough for them to repsond to.
Dear Hannah, yes it is ok to use our web site details,good luck in your exams and do not forget us when your need a taxi,
Simon Pilgrim
Thursday, November 12, 2009
1st Draft
Confusion over the future of Royal Norwich Golf Club
Oct 22 2009
MYSTERY surrounds the future of Norwich’s oldest golf club, following rumours of its impending closure and sale for building land.
Last week the Eastern Herald received a letter from a golfer concerned about the future of the Royal Norwich Golf Club, after he had heard reports that it would close in the next 12 months.
The letter, from a Mr B Ownley of Spixworth, said he had been a member of the club for the past 23 years and was a regular user of the local golf course.
Mr Ownley said: "My wife and I enjoy a game of golf. We went up to the course on a lovely sunny day only to find that there were just the two of us out on the course all morning.
"When we returned to the club house the barmaid, told us that the staff had been told unofficially that the club was to close and the land sold for housing development."
Despite numerous attempts to get their side of the story, the Eastern Herald failed to speak to any officials from the golf club this week.
Further enquiries with local Broadland councillors and the business community failed to shed any more light on the club’s future.
Broadland councillor and businesswoman, Elen Jones said: "We’re not sure what’s going on there. I can confirm that an outline planning application has been received for a significant part of the site and that it is currently being reviewed by officials.
Norwich City councillor for Hellesdon West, Mike Thomas said: "As far as I know, there have been no announcements it will close, but there has been a drop in membership recently. If this is the case, from my position as a councillor and a keen golfer I would ask people to support the club by using it."
Royal Norwich Golf Club was opened in 1905, and occupies approximately 73 acres of land, on either side of Drayton High Road. It was granted the title ‘Royal’ in 1931 following the Royal family regularly playing the course, whilst resident at Sandringham. However, in recent times the club has seen a steady fall in its membership numbers and increasing running costs.
The Eastern Herald contacted Mr Hugo White, current club captain who declined to make any comment.
However, the Herald has learned that a national building company has been contacted to discuss a joint building venture with a local entrepreneur businessman. Neither party would make any comment.
The club also has the unique distinction of playing host to a round of golf between three British Prime Ministers in Clement Atlee, Sir Winston Churchill and David Lloyd George.
Do you know anymore about this or any other story? If so, call us on 01603 424242.
I have completed my first draft of my main front page news story. There are several aspects of it that i have analysed and i will rewrite, alter or take out. I realise i will have to do this several times. One section of it which i am going to add to is i don't think i have got enough personal opinion in it, which will mean i could for example go ask some individuals or local businesses opinion, which will hopefully be one way i could improve it.
Further more the way that i have started writing the news report is not in a way which you would normally see it done. So i am going to reword some it accordingly so that it sounds more like a news report.
On the front cover i am going only give the title and basic information about the story, and then at the end i am going to add in a sentences which will tell the reader to go to another page. I am using this method to firstly attract peoples attention then once i have it, it won't give away a lot of information but will encourage them to read on throughout the rest of the newspaper.
Oct 22 2009
MYSTERY surrounds the future of Norwich’s oldest golf club, following rumours of its impending closure and sale for building land.
Last week the Eastern Herald received a letter from a golfer concerned about the future of the Royal Norwich Golf Club, after he had heard reports that it would close in the next 12 months.
The letter, from a Mr B Ownley of Spixworth, said he had been a member of the club for the past 23 years and was a regular user of the local golf course.
Mr Ownley said: "My wife and I enjoy a game of golf. We went up to the course on a lovely sunny day only to find that there were just the two of us out on the course all morning.
"When we returned to the club house the barmaid, told us that the staff had been told unofficially that the club was to close and the land sold for housing development."
Despite numerous attempts to get their side of the story, the Eastern Herald failed to speak to any officials from the golf club this week.
Further enquiries with local Broadland councillors and the business community failed to shed any more light on the club’s future.
Broadland councillor and businesswoman, Elen Jones said: "We’re not sure what’s going on there. I can confirm that an outline planning application has been received for a significant part of the site and that it is currently being reviewed by officials.
Norwich City councillor for Hellesdon West, Mike Thomas said: "As far as I know, there have been no announcements it will close, but there has been a drop in membership recently. If this is the case, from my position as a councillor and a keen golfer I would ask people to support the club by using it."
Royal Norwich Golf Club was opened in 1905, and occupies approximately 73 acres of land, on either side of Drayton High Road. It was granted the title ‘Royal’ in 1931 following the Royal family regularly playing the course, whilst resident at Sandringham. However, in recent times the club has seen a steady fall in its membership numbers and increasing running costs.
The Eastern Herald contacted Mr Hugo White, current club captain who declined to make any comment.
However, the Herald has learned that a national building company has been contacted to discuss a joint building venture with a local entrepreneur businessman. Neither party would make any comment.
The club also has the unique distinction of playing host to a round of golf between three British Prime Ministers in Clement Atlee, Sir Winston Churchill and David Lloyd George.
Do you know anymore about this or any other story? If so, call us on 01603 424242.
I have completed my first draft of my main front page news story. There are several aspects of it that i have analysed and i will rewrite, alter or take out. I realise i will have to do this several times. One section of it which i am going to add to is i don't think i have got enough personal opinion in it, which will mean i could for example go ask some individuals or local businesses opinion, which will hopefully be one way i could improve it.
Further more the way that i have started writing the news report is not in a way which you would normally see it done. So i am going to reword some it accordingly so that it sounds more like a news report.
On the front cover i am going only give the title and basic information about the story, and then at the end i am going to add in a sentences which will tell the reader to go to another page. I am using this method to firstly attract peoples attention then once i have it, it won't give away a lot of information but will encourage them to read on throughout the rest of the newspaper.
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